Critiques

Stop Motion.

There was alot effort put into this movie. I loved the fact that they used popular cultural icons such as Yoda and Master Chief. The one thing that you always need to remember with stop motion is to keep the camera stationary. I also liked that there were slides with a black background that describe the story and how the character feel. The song sets the right tone for the scene's feelings and emotion. The movement of the character could ave been alot smoother, it looked very unrealistic and sloppy.

Flipbook.
Alot of time has been put into the flipbook and that is easily observed. The producer really worked hard in developing this amazing flipbook. The fight scene was presented very well with a comical touch. I know this already took alot of time but they could put some more effort in adding more detail and maybe some text that would support the drawing. Also, he should move his thumbs so they weren't visible. He should add some relaxing music. The drawings tell the story but there could have been some improvments.

Sock Puppets
The scottish accents took this video to another level. The vidoe in reality, wasn't all that great. I have high standards from Nepheli's 7th grade sock puppet play. The play was really funny but the puppetier skills were not that great.

Animatics
The movie was too short and it went too fast, I would have to pause it so I could evaluate it for this critique. If it was slower, the movie would be perfect since the pictures and the sound effects get a perfect song.